I know that I am addicted to reading, literature of all sorts. XXX Keep plugging!!!!! More physical contact? More physical contact? Perhaps, a bit more suspense… ‘All good things come from hard work and dedication!’ – piercedtwins«1» Just my thoughts. I’ve not been published so, what do I know? ‘All good things come from hard work and dedication!’ – piercedtwins«1» Keep plugging!!!!! My problem was that there was no real development to the story. No real beginning middle or end. Just my thoughts. Just my thoughts. Perhaps, a bit more suspense… I know that I am addicted to reading, literature of all sorts. I know that I am addicted to reading, literature of all sorts. ‘All good things come from hard work and dedication!’ – piercedtwins«1» You have talent, it simply needs to be refined. Perhaps, a bit more suspense…
