Ruins it actually. desi xxx It wouldn’t be my first choice of words but its understandable, and yea, he had some mistakes, (maybe a lot of mistakes lol) but then you insult his “command of the language”. Victor waded through and let people use their ears to check his pockets. It wouldn’t be my first choice of words but its understandable, and yea, he had some mistakes, (maybe a lot of mistakes lol) but then you insult his “command of the language”. The next parts aren’t so ‘wordy’anonymous readerReport 2011-01-12 17:23:37Your use obscure definitions of “big” words it terribly distracting from the story. what are YOU saying? Over and above these things, the story sucks. Warren cubicles. Please. don’t be such a hypocrite, why don’t you write a story.BlknMild611Report 2011-01-12 20:56:48I can dig it. And then you use then when you mean than showing a serious lack of a command of the language.
