p.leaselearn to werite p[roperlyReport 2009-11-06 11:42:36Crappy writing . xxx desi . …is english a second language to you?? Agree with the first …who caught you? But this story is poorly written. …evidently from a boy younger than 24. …if you’re older…go back and finish high school!Report 2009-11-06 07:43:49The story line is good, but, the writing is terrible.«12» p.leaselearn to werite p[roperlyReport 2009-11-06 11:42:36Crappy writing . . …is english a second language to you?? p.leaselearn to werite p[roperlyReport 2009-11-06 11:42:36Crappy writing . . …is english a second language to you?? 6 s«12»Report 2016-04-06 21:42:49Negative vote because of the shaved pussy.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-01 01:38:00praveen plz axcept meanonymous readerReport 2012-08-07 02:53:04it is a “shaved” not shaven pussy. . . . . . . . … 6 s«12»Report 2016-04-06 21:42:49Negative vote because of the shaved pussy.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-01 01:38:00praveen plz axcept meanonymous readerReport 2012-08-07 02:53:04it is a “shaved” not shaven pussy. . . . . . . . … But this story is poorly written. …evidently from a boy younger than 24. …if you’re older…go back and finish high school!Report 2009-11-06 07:43:49The story line is good, but, the writing is terrible.«12»
