Terrificly written. Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? XXX 1 s«1»Report 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Terrificly written. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» However. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Very few spelling and punctuation errors. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. 1 s«1»Report 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. Even someone who is submissive I dont think would break so easy.
