7 s«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-22 01:23:45pretty good. xxx desi Grammar? Spelling? Grammar? Just a bit shortanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:47:37I thought it was a good story, and liked everything about the sex. Just a bit shortanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:47:37I thought it was a good story, and liked everything about the sex. However the story was just a bit weak. …I have to agree with the first poster. . … Grammar? Spelling? But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? Grammar? bit impposible, but its fanasy right? Spelling? Just a bit shortanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:47:37I thought it was a good story, and liked everything about the sex. Grammar? bit impposible, but its fanasy right? Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too. Grammar? Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too. Just a bit
