part 2 will be worth the wait!«1» It was good enough for me to struggle through the brick of words, but it needs paragraphs like a motherfucker.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-30 11:26:30I’m trying to figure why this story has a shit score… Huge blocks of text will have many people bitching. xxx desi part 2 will be worth the wait!«1» its great… Huge blocks of text will have many people bitching. 2 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-30 16:59:45It was a good story, but it needs serious reformatting. part 2 will be worth the wait!«1» 2 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-30 16:59:45It was a good story, but it needs serious reformatting. Huge blocks of text will have many people bitching. It was good enough for me to struggle through the brick of words, but it needs paragraphs like a motherfucker.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-30 11:26:30I’m trying to figure why this story has a shit score…




















