It feels like you are skipping around a lot; whether or not you are is a mystery. XXX I guess a neutral vote is in order because, like I said before, you have great ideas; you just need to tell them better.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 20:21:01First of all, this isn’t true. Secondly, why would someone who prays be on this site? 4 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-10 06:58:29poor writing and story telling skillsm but good ideas. You’re a fucked up person! I guess I just read your stories because you seem to have great ideas, but you just lack the skill at getting them down. I am not tearing you down or anything, but your style feels rushed and even a quick look-over before posting would benefit your writing. However, the beginning was strong but then on the end with the sex, you totally let us down. You’re a fucked up person!
