(countrycadillac)countrycadillacReport 2013-09-15 09:57:38The story was fine. xxx desi The wording and spelling was ugly !!! Good Luck !! The wording and spelling was ugly !!! You need a Proof Reader to go over your stories BEFORE you let then out of your sight. The wording and spelling was ugly !!! Don’t fall into the trap of writing the same garbage and being a lame clone of the majority of new posters that have shown up here lately.«123» Don’t fall into the trap of writing the same garbage and being a lame clone of the majority of new posters that have shown up here lately.«123» You need a Proof Reader to go over your stories BEFORE you let then out of your sight. Work on your English and presentation but please keep your style and concept. (countrycadillac)countrycadillacReport 2013-09-15 09:57:38The story was fine. Work on your English and presentation but please keep your style and concept. The wording and spelling was ugly !!!
