There are many spelling errors and the dialogue is rather stilted in several places. great idea thouanonymous readerReport 2011-06-28 05:58:03ThereÂ’s a secert about your post. desi xxx Please get some!anonymous readerReport 2013-07-19 08:37:42Reading your story is difficult please get an editor/ghost reader before posting to help you form sentences into paragraphs. Whether you are or are not, you clearly need editorial help. There are many spelling errors and the dialogue is rather stilted in several places. ICTYBTIHTKYanonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:29:27good story want moreanonymous readerReport 2011-06-11 09:52:43I gave the story a positive rating, but you sure could use a good editor. There are many spelling errors and the dialogue is rather stilted in several places. Please get some!anonymous readerReport 2013-07-19 08:37:42Reading your story is difficult please get an editor/ghost reader before posting to help you form sentences into paragraphs. great idea thouanonymous readerReport 2011-06-28 05:58:03ThereÂ’s a secert about your post. great idea thouanonymous readerReport 2011-06-28 05:58:03ThereÂ’s a secert about your post.
