to the author i would advise reading over what you write and making sure it sounds right and try to add more to the sex… but i get what you mean… desi xxx to the author i would advise reading over what you write and making sure it sounds right and try to add more to the sex… to the author i would advise reading over what you write and making sure it sounds right and try to add more to the sex… The story has potential, but the spelling, grammar, and technical details were horrendous and ought to be checked before publishing.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 10:28:23IJWTS wow! {intentional words} I joust love when the word is spelled write, butt utterly the rung won to use their.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-14 23:07:37kinda harsh Ghostrider939… 5 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-05-22 02:21:36Wow, some of the more painful writing I’ve muddled through.
