The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… xxx desi but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… I am looking forward to seeing more from you so I hope you write more. 3 s«1»animal99Report 2013-11-30 15:04:15I had to log in to write this:
I really enjoyed your story. I am looking forward to seeing more from you so I hope you write more. Good story.. I’m afraid that is why your approval score is lower than I expected. now write a sequel :)anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 01:01:17teri maa ki saale. 3 s«1»animal99Report 2013-11-30 15:04:15I had to log in to write this:
I really enjoyed your story.
