It will allow you to see some of the tools of the language we call Standard English.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-31 13:43:01really??? xxx desi There is a famous book called “Eats Shoots and Leaves” by Lynne Truss. There is a famous book called “Eats Shoots and Leaves” by Lynne Truss. Transforming a story in your head to a story in print is an art. that was just bad.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-30 07:11:52STOP WRITTING! What you want to do is have the story in your head recreated in the head of your reader, exactly the same as it is in yours. Please read it. It will allow you to see some of the tools of the language we call Standard English.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-31 13:43:01really??? It’s really bad, just stop.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-30 06:38:27i dont think it was that bad but could be better but please use the whole page when writing your story and i hope there is more to come , so dont stop writing but add a little something thats kinky into your story line«12»
