I don’t care how much sex Herbert is having, that story doesn’t interest me. XXX All of those are noble but remember your audience. This is one end of the scale: making your story just about the sex. I had the fortune of being introduced to well-written stories *rooted in reality* early on. That’s another part of it: Interest. I had the fortune of being introduced to well-written stories *rooted in reality* early on. Would your stories be interesting, or at least have the potential to be, if your stories didn’t have sex scenes? Porn makes the initial impression but the story is what gets you continued viewers. Now I understand entirely that the whole point of these stories is to fantasize. It’s a poor supplement to story and I’m so tired of the entire plot of every erotica every 2-bit Johnny and his freaking grandma could write in their sleep being just that the lead male is so attractive he overpowers women.
