First the story line runs fairly consistent throughout. 7 s«12»Stealth EagleReport 2017-06-08 22:41:55I think that this story has merits but it also has some rough places. XXX You also have not finished the story which is a big letdown, what happens to the main characters? You also have not finished the story which is a big letdown, what happens to the main characters? Also try and make paragraphs makes it easier to read.Report 2010-07-21 04:18:40its spelled which not witch.«12» But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. You also have not finished the story which is a big letdown, what happens to the main characters? You also have not finished the story which is a big letdown, what happens to the main characters? 7 s«12»Stealth EagleReport 2017-06-08 22:41:55I think that this story has merits but it also has some rough places. Also try and make paragraphs makes it easier to read.Report 2010-07-21 04:18:40its spelled which not witch.«12»
