7 s«12»Stealth EagleReport 2017-06-08 22:41:55I think that this story has merits but it also has some rough places. XXX But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. First the story line runs fairly consistent throughout. But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. Also try and make paragraphs makes it easier to read.Report 2010-07-21 04:18:40its spelled which not witch.«12» Also try and make paragraphs makes it easier to read.Report 2010-07-21 04:18:40its spelled which not witch.«12» But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. First the story line runs fairly consistent throughout. 7 s«12»Stealth EagleReport 2017-06-08 22:41:55I think that this story has merits but it also has some rough places. But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read.
