its better than the first! xxx desi this series is very good so far, and i would love to see you take it somewhere great. this series is very good so far, and i would love to see you take it somewhere great. you had the same problem in part one, but get part three out soon!!Report 2008-07-08 17:53:51Dude you deffently need to write a few moreReport 2008-06-07 14:15:10good job but check your grammar. you had the same problem in part one, but get part three out soon!!Report 2008-07-08 17:53:51Dude you deffently need to write a few moreReport 2008-06-07 14:15:10good job but check your grammar. pick one!! its better than the first! Your getting better!!!«123» Just write these up in microsoft word, use spell check and you should be good.Report 2008-05-27 05:00:27respectReport 2008-05-26 15:11:56I like it.. this series is very good so far, and i would love to see you take it somewhere great.
